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5. Nice rhythm, balance and imagery, and...

Thu Jul 16, 2020, 06:56 PM

Jul 2020

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maybe I'm just an old guy, but the strolling "rolling" part reminds me of an old Ike & Tina Turner song (covered by CCR), Proud Mary:

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Need a place to put this down, maybe get reaction [View all] bobbieinok Jul 2020 OP

Very nicely done! SheltieLover Jul 2020 #1

I like it 🙂 MLAA Jul 2020 #2

Thank you for those verses, bobbieinok. +++ pdxflyboy Jul 2020 #3

Thank you for responses bobbieinok Jul 2020 #4

Nice rhythm, balance and imagery, and... Amy-Strange Jul 2020 #5